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	<title>Comments on: The Village Explainer &#8211; Part 1</title>
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	<description>Practical wisdom for novelists and other storytellers</description>
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		<title>By: elizabeth mallard</title>
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		<dc:creator>elizabeth mallard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Apr 2008 08:52:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;This is great. As a reader, I want to be left to fill in a lot myself--not consciously--but on some level. Give me a nibble of detail and I&#039;ll understand, fill in the whole picture about the widow&#039;s grief. Show me her pale hands folding and unfolding her napkin or something and I&#039;ll happily fill in all the rest. Reading is an act of imagination. Village explainers go yell in the town square. Stay off the page!&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is great. As a reader, I want to be left to fill in a lot myself&#8211;not consciously&#8211;but on some level. Give me a nibble of detail and I&#8217;ll understand, fill in the whole picture about the widow&#8217;s grief. Show me her pale hands folding and unfolding her napkin or something and I&#8217;ll happily fill in all the rest. Reading is an act of imagination. Village explainers go yell in the town square. Stay off the page!</p>
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		<title>By: Lisa Kenney</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lisa Kenney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Apr 2008 18:14:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I&#039;m looking forward to Part II. I think one of the difficulties in abandoning over-narration to trust the reader is that not all readers are the same. All it takes is one person to ask me for clarification and I know I&#039;m more than happy to turn into the village explainer/village idiot ;)&lt;/p&gt;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m looking forward to Part II. I think one of the difficulties in abandoning over-narration to trust the reader is that not all readers are the same. All it takes is one person to ask me for clarification and I know I&#8217;m more than happy to turn into the village explainer/village idiot <img src='http://writeabetternovel.net/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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